• Home
  • About

A Runner's Story

A Runner's Story

Tag Archives: reviews

Amazon Reviews

03 Friday Feb 2017

Posted by Ed Mahoney in Novel

≈ 2 Comments

Tags

Cyber War I, reviews

amazon-stars

The reviews are finally starting to roll in on Amazon.  Nothing on Goodreads or Apple iBooks yet.  I think I would be happy even if they were all 3 stars.  It was nerve-racking, waiting for reviews to appear.  And just having reviews of any sort is critical to promoting further sales.

Reviews are inherently subjective, but I would give myself 4 stars.  As a debut novelist, my skills aren’t quite there yet to give myself 5 stars.  I know where the weaknesses are in the writing.  I give myself four though because I am satisfied I accomplished what few others have done, which is to convey fairly technical information on cyber attacks in a digestible fictional story.  I read a few books in the sub-genre and can tell you, no one else has done this.  I’ll add that I just discovered a book written by a German author that looks promising, but everything else merely references cyber attacks in the title, and give near zero details in the book.

Of course, this is also one of my book’s major distractions.  I broke the rules of the genre to get so technical.  I was warned.  But I wasn’t necessarily writing to sell a million copies. Like my blog, I was writing for myself.  And what myself wanted to do was to relate a computer security primer as a fictional read.  I did, based on advice from beta readers and my editor, delete thousands of words.  I also moved much of the technical narrative into dialog – that helped make it more readable.

So most of the reviews reference how technical the book is.  One review clearly phrases it as a criticism, which is totally fair.  It’s a no-no for a thriller to get so in the weeds.  I was ready for that critique though.  Very curious to see what else readers will comment on.  One of my early beta-readers said he couldn’t read it because it was so in-your-face political.  He didn’t provide examples and I have no idea what he meant.  My undergrad is in poli-sci and I feel confident I didn’t intentionally insert political commentary.  My characters had points of view, very few of them were mine.  Beyond politics, there are some easter eggs in there I’m waiting for readers to challenge.

Amazon and Goodreads allow me to comment on reviews directly online.  I have been advised by other authors to not do that.  I probably will though.  It’s review season people.  Review early and review often.

Share this:

  • Share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook
  • Share on X (Opens in new window) X
  • Share on Pinterest (Opens in new window) Pinterest
  • Share on LinkedIn (Opens in new window) LinkedIn
  • Share on Reddit (Opens in new window) Reddit
  • More
  • Share on Tumblr (Opens in new window) Tumblr
  • Email a link to a friend (Opens in new window) Email
  • Print (Opens in new window) Print
Like Loading...

Ed Mahoney is a runner, author, and cybersecurity product director who writes about endurance, travel, and life’s small ironies. His blog A Runner’s Story captures the rhythm between motion, meaning, and memory.

Search this blog

  • Boulder Marathon
  • Britt&Eric
  • Colorado Trail
  • Covid-19
  • covid-noir
  • cyber war
  • Ellie Rose
  • Geek Horror
  • Marathons
  • Margot
  • Medical Files
  • Novel
  • Other Stories
  • ReBlog
  • Running
  • Snowboard
  • Snowshoe
  • Storytelling
  • training plan
  • Ultra
  • Victoria BC

Buy Full Spectrum Cyberwar at Amazon

Buy Cyber War I at Amazon

Buy on Amazon India for ₹99

Buy on Amazon U.K. for £2.27

English Edition on Amazon Germany

Buy on Amazon Brazil for R$11.29

Archives

Blog Stats

  • 155,515 hits

Girlfriend Cult

Recent Comments

Terry Collier's avatarTerry Collier on Hallmark Hikes
Terry Collier's avatarTerry Collier on Christmas 2025
Unknown's avatarAnonymous on Christmas 2025
Paul's avatarPaul on Christmas 2025
Ed Mahoney's avatarEd Mahoney on On Racing

Recent Posts

  • Hallmark Hikes January 26, 2026
  • Nerd Out January 13, 2026
  • Christmas 2025 December 31, 2025
  • On Racing December 7, 2025
  • Running in Oxygen Debt is Racing December 6, 2025
  • My Thanksgiving November 28, 2025
  • Safe and Sound November 2, 2025
  • Castlewood Canyon October 18, 2025
  • Victoria with Friends October 12, 2025
  • September September 16, 2025
  • Senior Pass August 23, 2025
  • First Run After August 9, 2025
  • Boulder Rez Marathon August 2, 2025
  • I Hope I break 5 July 26, 2025
  • Margot’s Saturday Adventures July 20, 2025
  • The Flower Run June 29, 2025
  • The Summer Strength Plan May 29, 2025
  • Running in the Clouds May 26, 2025
  • Just a little 10K May 18, 2025
  • Mother’s Day Run May 12, 2025
  • Colorado Marathon 2025 May 5, 2025
  • Marathon Prep April 27, 2025
  • My Face Tells the Story April 6, 2025
  • Dinner Stories March 16, 2025
  • Running is Joy March 1, 2025
  • Austin Marathon Photos, Period! February 22, 2025
  • Austin Marathon 2025 February 16, 2025
  • Next up, ATX February 8, 2025
  • On Writing and Generative AI February 3, 2025
  • Bushwhacking Bandera January 17, 2025
  • Not Bandera January 10, 2025
  • Trail Spirits January 3, 2025
  • Sixty-Two at Sixty-Two December 30, 2024
  • Mud, Ice & Snow November 30, 2024
  • Winter is Slipping in November 24, 2024
  • Around the Res November 24, 2024
  • The Boulder Res and Back November 9, 2024
  • Strength November 3, 2024
  • LMNT October 20, 2024
  • In Training October 13, 2024
  • Boulder Marathon 2024 October 5, 2024
  • Pre-Race Jitters September 28, 2024
  • Fall Racing Season September 22, 2024
  • Rooftop Sunset September 14, 2024
  • Mile Zero September 8, 2024
  • Dallas Road Waterfront September 6, 2024
  • The Boulderthon Fueling Plan August 30, 2024
  • Struts August 25, 2024
  • Return to Peaceful Valley August 18, 2024
  • It’s Time to Up the Miles August 11, 2024

Colorado=Security

Goodreads

Top Posts & Pages

  • Fat Face
  • Intervals
  • Planning Party
  • Five Degrees
  • Twenty Mile Warmup

Top Clicks

  • None

RSS Feed

  • RSS - Posts
  • RSS - Comments

Blog at WordPress.com.

  • Subscribe Subscribed
    • A Runner's Story
    • Join 257 other subscribers
    • Already have a WordPress.com account? Log in now.
    • A Runner's Story
    • Subscribe Subscribed
    • Sign up
    • Log in
    • Report this content
    • View site in Reader
    • Manage subscriptions
    • Collapse this bar
 

Loading Comments...
 

    %d